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Quips of constant disapproval every time her mother speaks:
She stands out — no doubt about it — just like all the other freaks.
Thawing frozen inhibitions in a winter space and time
As she idly scans her options from some interface design.
With an arbitrary click she picks a party to attend—
Painted fingers on the pulse of all the latest greatest trends;
Splicing vintage inclinations with a cyberpunk couture
Like some cautionary model from a Just-Say-No brochure.
It's a booming sellers' market and the buyers know the drill:
If you think it, you can feel it via potions, powders, pills...
Wands of plastic luminescence scribe her movement through the air,
Waving studded pleather bracelets with a drama student's flare.
Meanwhile self-indulged incisions aim to heighten her mystique,
As the teary-eyed mascara dribbles barcodes down her cheek.
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For an old friend...

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:icondarkfuryofmysoul:
This is really well thought out, and the title does corrospond well with the poem. I would have to say a good piece, expesially if its for a friend. I like the concept, and the rhyming throughout is catchy. Favorite line would have to be "If you think it, you can feel it via potions, powders, pills..."
Hope to see more from you, my Poetic friend!
:iconhyperblonde:
I like the way it flows and the words seem very well suited. Reminds me of some people I know...

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"If all the world's a stage, I want to operate the trap door."
:icontedpikul:
I'm just going to sit quietly and wonder why I am suddenly without words. Very well done. Very well.

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It's not important that we solve the mysteries of the universe, only that we accept that they exist and give them due credit.

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